Final Plot Idea Powerpoint

Above is the Powerpoint in which as a group we pitched to our target audience. We created this presentation as a group (me, Lydia and Ella) including a narrative structure, the types of shots we desired to include in our trailer, the locations which would feature in our trailer, the key characters and the actors starring in our trailer as well as our style inspiration.
The main issues which were raised by our target audience was they were unaware of whom the antagonist character was as the character is unknown to the audience. Our initial ideas were that by having the antagonist character as an unknown character this would create a greater enigma for the target audience, creating a sense of thrill and mystery for them. They would only find out whom the antagonist was when watching the film "Obsess". However later on in the presentation the antagonist name was revealed to them as Michael, they were then unsure of the connection in which Michael had with the other characters (Ricky, Chloe, Sarah and Jessica). Therefore after pitching our plot idea to our target audience, we addressed this issue and decided that Ricky and Michael are going to be cousins. In this aspect, it is revealed that Michael is jealous of Ricky and the relationship he has with Chloe due to the fact Michael has an obsession with Chloe. Ricky is completely oblivious of Michael's obsession which is only revealed later on in the film trailer when Ricky enters Michael's room after the sudden death of Michael's father.